Art of the Start


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This is actually going to print. Blech.


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Posted by , Thursday, August 26, 2004, at 7:20 PM.
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This is all the proof I need that marketing guys know hot, award-winning design when they see it.

(Mumbles to self, unhappily) Idiots, they’re all idiots . . .

E. Johnston , August 27, 2004 9:11 AM (#)

Compared to 95 percent of the rest of the contest entries, this is an incredible cover.…

Dean , August 27, 2004 9:20 AM (#)

I like the title treatment but the image is a total cliché. It is suppiosed to be a spark but really looks more like someone beating an egg. I have seen this kind of image on modern cookbook covers.

Leslie , August 27, 2004 10:32 AM (#)

Oh GAWD.

Robot Johnny , August 27, 2004 11:35 AM (#)

Regardless of what those hacks at istockphoto say, I happen to know the art director at Portfolio (an imprint of Viking), and this whole contest thing is something that he (and many other people at his company) were against. And after seeing the results, I know why.

J. , August 27, 2004 11:42 AM (#)

There are contests in which there must be a winner, and then there are contests in which the judges refuse to award a prize. Unfortunately, this is an example of the former.

Joe , August 27, 2004 12:21 PM (#)

Sorry, Guy.

We’ll still read it, though!

Giles , August 27, 2004 12:49 PM (#)

Not me - I’ve been turned off by the whole contest thing.

If you read it, at least check it out from the library. Don’t give your money to someone who cheapens our profession.

J. , August 27, 2004 12:57 PM (#)

I was hoping for free/CC-licensed PDFs being available for download.

Giles , August 27, 2004 2:06 PM (#)

Even better!

J. , August 27, 2004 3:20 PM (#)

What exactly is wrong with it? I don’t think it’s particularly attractive, but I don’t really see any Bad Design™ except that i can’t tell what the picture is supposed to be.

It would be very helpful to the students who read this site (me!) if you’d all go into a bit more detail. Thanks!

Brian , August 29, 2004 1:29 AM (#)

Brian, there are two issues. One is the contest and the waves it caused; read back through the entries to get the whole story on why it’s particularly not welcome here.

The second is what you mentioned — it’s not attractive and you can’t tell what the main photograph is of! (In all seriousness, people I know and respect have discussed eggs.)

Giles , August 29, 2004 10:36 AM (#)

Brian, the cover would probably be adequate for a small publisher or a DIYer. However, it is not a professional book cover for a larger, established publisher who is trying to make a profit from this title.

You asked a good question, though. The next time you’re in a bookstore try placing The Art of the Start next to other books in its category. (Go ahead, create your own store endcap. I do.) I have a feeling that you’ll be able to see a difference then.

Amanda , August 29, 2004 2:12 PM (#)

Go ahead, create your own store endcap. I do.

No wonder you’re so loved at stores all over Florida…;)

Giles , August 29, 2004 3:41 PM (#)

Regardless of what those hacks at istockphoto say

Ouch! Even though I don’t like this cover at all, that does mean the istock guys are a bunch of hacks. They’re actually pretty cool.

Josh S , August 30, 2004 6:59 PM (#)

Leave aside the question of the competition; the main problem was the design brief, which basically only contained the title and a convoluted (and misleading at that) subtitle, “The Time-Tested, Battle-Hardened Guide for Anyone Starting Anything,” which was mercifully axed. It wasn’t about starting anything — if Guy’s seminars are any indication of the content, it’s about startups and other business ventures.

At any rate, there wasn’t really anything to hook into for interesting, unique design ideas. Guy’s apparent taste for visual cliches didn’t help matters either.

For the record, however, I think the idea behind the visual here is worth developing; I just don’t think it’s fully there yet. And the title type, well… better than many of the other entries, but still pretty clunky. Oddly, the author lines are nicely done — should have taken a cue from that for the title.

Cheshire , August 30, 2004 8:03 PM (#)

w/r/t the type, there’s something totally different on the web page:

joe , August 31, 2004 3:34 PM (#)

I think the image is supposed to be a matchstick being lit. It explains the gradient in the title. Still, something seems to be lacking in the overall design. Because the photo is abstract, it makes the cover look unfinished.

Chuck Spidell , October 27, 2004 6:42 AM (#)

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